Information on the process about producing hydro-electricity is presented in the enumerated diagram.

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producing hydro-electricity is presented in the enumerated diagram. Looking from an
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process consists of multiple steps in order. First of all,
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state requires water flow from any kind of water pond, but in
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it is
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.In
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step liquid frow intakes in penstrock. Moving water creates
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pressure and causes
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to spin,
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liquid goes under the ground. In the next step,
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spins and charges
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is located in
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with energy. The
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in
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transmits energy to
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power lines.
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