The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The line graph most popular
ilustrations
how many Correct your spelling
illustrating
illustrations
people
visits
Correct subject-verb agreement
visit
to
and from the Change preposition
apply
UK
since
1979 till 1999, Change preposition
from
whereas
, the bar chart give
information aboutCorrect subject-verb agreement
gives
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the
countries
(France, Spain, USA
, Greece, and Turkey) visited by Correct article usage
the USA
UK
residents
1999
. Unit are measured in Change preposition
in 1999
millions
Add the preposition
ofmillions
people
.
Overall
, visits
abroad by UK
residents
accounted for largest then
Correct your spelling
than
visits
to the UK
by overseas residents
at the begining
of Correct your spelling
beginning
line
chart and it Add an article
the line
upper
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apply
double
Wrong verb form
doubled
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
given. Correct article usage
the period
While
France and Spain made up the majority of most
popular Correct article usage
the most
countries
visited by UK
residents
1999
, Turkey was Change preposition
in 1999
minority
, Add an article
a minority
the minority
other
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and other
countries
(USA, and Greece) comprised of average
count of Add an article
the average
an average
people
.
With regards to the line graph, the amount of people
visits
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visited
oversea
by Fix the agreement mistake
overseas
UK
citizens started at aproximately
11 Correct your spelling
approximately
millions
Change to singular
million
people
in the first year, gradual
grew to more than five times. Change the adjective
gradually
Likewise
, come to see th
the Correct your spelling
that
UK
by other countries
people
increased only more than twice from 10 millions
to nearly 28 Change to singular
million
millions
visitors.
Change to singular
million
One
the other hand≤, in the case of Correct your spelling
On
bar
graph first of all France Correct article usage
the bar
then
Spain was
major Correct subject-verb agreement
were
countries
where UK
citizens visited in 1999, at the same time only quarter
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a quarter
Change preposition
of
UK
residents
visited Turkey, and about 4 and 3 millions
visitors Change to singular
million
was
in the USA and Greece respectively.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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