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The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The display table
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 pie shows the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. The below information describes
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the total value in billions of dollars. The total value in billions of dollars in 1988 was 6.57, in 1992 it was 8.52 and
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 in 2000 it was 10.72. Source of fish imported to the US. In 1988 the highest was Canada with 69%, in
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 it was 19% and in the
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Other it was 27%. In 1992 the highest was 54% in Canada, in
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China it was 28% and in the Others it was 48%. In 2000 the highest was in others with 42%, in ,Canada it was 38% and in China it was 38%. The data
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 from 1998 to 2000.
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, there has been a great change from 1988 to 2000. The above information describes
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 of fish imported to the US.
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