You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter apologise for what happened explain why you missed the deadline tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Mr Ali, I believe you already received a notification about losing our client "Triple A"

due to

the latest project repercussions, but I think you do not know the full story behind what happened. In

this

letter, let me explain what happened and how we can avoid

this

in the future.

Firstly

, please accept my apologies about losing

such

an opportunity and client, I understand how

this

customer was important to our organisation.

Secondly

, we lost

this

tender because I missed the deadline to finish the project in time, but the main reason behind

this

, is that the customer gave us a limited time to deliver our work, around 5 working days only, and we told him we will not be able to finish it in time

due to

work with other projects and lack of resources.

Moreover

, I believe in order to avoid

this

situation in the future, we need to hire more people in our department;

accordingly

, they will assist us in coming cases. It would be highly appreciated if you raise my recommendation to the upper management. Yours Sincerely,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

183 words

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