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The chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.

The chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.
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The display chart shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in the western Cape between 2000 and 2010. The below information describes GDPR growth in %. In the
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 2000, it was near 4,
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 in the
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 2001 it was near 4,
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 it grew by 4 in the
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 2002, in the
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 2003 it was around 4, in the
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 2004 it was 6, in the
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 2005
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 it was more than 6, but in the
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 2007 it was the highest with 6.5, in the
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 2008 it was nearby 4, in 2009 it was -1 and in the
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 2010 it was 2. But
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, The highest was in the
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 2007. From 2003 to 2008 it kept on increasing. The data is in %.
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, the above information describes the GDPR growth in %. The information is from the years 2000 to 2010.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "describes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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