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It is difficult for some people living in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the cases? What could be done to solve this problem?

#people #cities #exercise #cases
Nowadays,
due to
 the busy
life
 that people
are having
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 in modern society, it is hard for them to get enough physical exercise, but there are many
ways
 to solve
this
 problem,
this
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 essay is going to discuss the cases and give some
ways
 to resolve the issue. Living a modern
life
 in cities can have lots of advantages and disadvantages. One of the most important drawbacks
about
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 residing in cities is that
indivisuals
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individuals
individual
, usually
dont
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don't
 have sufficient
workout
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workouts
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 during the day, because of their jobs or the unhealthy foods that they eat and they are so busy all the
time
 that they do not even have
time
 to walk a little, and
this
 issue will harm them in many
ways
 in the future.
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 they may get fat, get a heart attack or even get depressed because of their
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situation
. In my opinion, there is still hope for these people to solve their
problem
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 and live a healthy
life
. They can do a new routine to change their
life
such
 as eating healthy foods,
take
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 some
time
 to walk
everyday
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,
avoid
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 using the computer for a long
time
 and
try
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 to go to the gym if they have
time
. There are
also
 some
ways
 for
govermants
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governments
government
 to help their citizens have more
exercising
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exercise
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 and physical activities
such
 as
,
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 building more gyms or parks or making some television shows about the importance of physical workouts. Founders of the companies can
also
 hold some walking events for their employees to make them move a bit. Despite that increasing the usage of technology is helping
the
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humans have a
more simple
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life
, it is
also
effecting
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affecting
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 their health
seriousley
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seriously
, and it is
and
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 important issue wich can be resolved by caring and learning easily.
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