The line chart shows exports in billions of dollars.

The line chart shows exports in billions of dollars.
The line chart depicts the
Australian
exports in billions of dollars in four wide countries of the world over 22 years.
Overall
, the rate of
Australian
exporting from China rose dramatically over a time period coinciding with a moderate decrease in the number of exports to Japan and the US .
whereas
the exportation percentage of India was stagnant ,
While
that fluctuation in the US during the period . The proportion of
Australian
exports to China started out at a tiny fraction in 1990 which
then
continued to increase gradually until a sharp growth from slightly above 10% in 2005 to approximately 25% in 2010 as it reached almost 27% in 2012. The exportation rate from Australia to India was at a plateau from 1990 to 2000
then
it rose dramatically to about 7% in 2010 and a slight drop to well under 10% in 2012 The percentage of exported goods from Australia to Japan was at around 26% in 1990 before it experienced a downward trend over the time period until it was almost 18% in 2012
whereas
the
Australian
goods sent to the US experienced some fluctuations until it decreased gradually to reach around 5% in 2010 and it rose marginally to approximately 7% in 2012
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