You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays,
technology
is increasing so young people
in the modern world seem to have more power
and influence
than any previous young generation
. this
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This
have
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has
an
great impact on the relationship between old and young Change the article
a
people
.
Firstly
, As technology
is increased
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increasing
same
ways young are becoming more Correct article usage
the same
power
and Replace the word
powerful
influence
. For example
, a person with age
35 Change preposition
aged
have
more information about history but Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the a
person Choose an article
the
a
with age
25 Change preposition
aged
have
more Correct subject-verb agreement
has
knowledge
and expercience
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experience
about
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in
tehnology
. Correct your spelling
technology
However
, young
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the young
generation
should teach old
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the old
generation
as well old genration
should give Correct your spelling
generation
knowledge
about history to new
Add an article
a new
the new
generation
. Hence
, both
should understand each other. Thus
, both
have great knowledge
. Government should encouagre
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encourage
both
old
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the old
generation
and new
Add an article
a new
the new
generation
. Old
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The old
generation
have
good Change the verb form
has
expercience
and Correct your spelling
experience
young
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the young
genration
have good Correct your spelling
generation
knowledge
.
Secondly
, From my own knowledge
and experience the the main reason for this
case is development in technology
. For example
, young people
watch T.V., video, vlogs
and Correct word choice
and vlogs
reading
a lot Wrong verb form
read
from
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on
internet
which give them Add an article
the internet
power
and influence
them a lot. Thirdly
, There is a great impact own
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on
relationship
between old and young Correct article usage
the relationship
people
in both
ways advantage
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advantages
as well as
disadvantage
. Not only Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
It have
become hard for Verb problem
has it
old
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the old
genration
to learn about new things but Correct your spelling
generation
also
for young
its become hard to live without Correct article usage
the young
technology
. For
my own Change preposition
From
experience
I have seen that it has been Add a comma
,experience
diffecult
for Correct your spelling
difficult
old
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the old
generation
manage
with new Fix the infinitive
to manage
generation
.
To conclude
, Old people
are connet
to history and Correct your spelling
connected
young
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the young
generation
are more connted
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connected
towardes
modern world Correct your spelling
towards
seem
to have more Correct word choice
and seem
power
and influence
than any previous young generation
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