You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation. Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays,
technology
is increasing so young Use synonyms
people
in the modern world seem to have more Use synonyms
power
and Use synonyms
influence
than any previous young Use synonyms
generation
. Use synonyms
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this
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have
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has
an
great impact on the relationship between old and young Change the article
a
people
.
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Firstly
, As Linking Words
technology
is Use synonyms
increased
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increasing
same
ways young are becoming more Correct article usage
the same
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power
and Replace the word
powerful
influence
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For example
, a person Linking Words
with age
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aged
have
more information about history but Correct subject-verb agreement
has
the a
person Choose an article
the
a
with age
25 Change preposition
aged
have
more Correct subject-verb agreement
has
knowledge
and Use synonyms
expercience
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experience
about
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in
tehnology
. Correct your spelling
technology
However
, Linking Words
young
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the young
generation
should teach Use synonyms
old
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the old
generation
as well old Use synonyms
genration
should give Correct your spelling
generation
knowledge
about history to Use synonyms
new
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a new
the new
generation
. Use synonyms
Hence
, Linking Words
both
should understand each other. Use synonyms
Thus
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both
have great Use synonyms
knowledge
. Government should Use synonyms
encouagre
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encourage
both
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old
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the old
generation
and Use synonyms
new
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a new
the new
generation
. Use synonyms
Old
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The old
generation
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have
good Change the verb form
has
expercience
and Correct your spelling
experience
young
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the young
genration
have good Correct your spelling
generation
knowledge
.
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Secondly
, From my own Linking Words
knowledge
and experience the the main reason for Use synonyms
this
case is development in Linking Words
technology
. Use synonyms
For example
, young Linking Words
people
watch T.V., video, Use synonyms
vlogs
and Correct word choice
and vlogs
reading
a lot Wrong verb form
read
from
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on
internet
which give them Add an article
the internet
power
and Use synonyms
influence
them a lot. Use synonyms
Thirdly
, There is a great impact Linking Words
own
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on
relationship
between old and young Correct article usage
the relationship
people
in Use synonyms
both
ways Use synonyms
advantage
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advantages
as well as
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disadvantage
. Not only Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
It have
become hard for Verb problem
has it
old
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the old
genration
to learn about new things but Correct your spelling
generation
also
for Linking Words
young
its become hard to live without Correct article usage
the young
technology
. Use synonyms
For
my own Change preposition
From
experience
I have seen that it has been Add a comma
,experience
diffecult
for Correct your spelling
difficult
old
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the old
generation
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manage
with new Fix the infinitive
to manage
generation
.
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To conclude
, Old Linking Words
people
are Use synonyms
connet
to history and Correct your spelling
connected
young
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the young
generation
are more Use synonyms
connted
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connected
towardes
modern world Correct your spelling
towards
seem
to have more Correct word choice
and seem
power
and Use synonyms
influence
than any previous young Use synonyms
generation
.Use synonyms
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