The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.
The graph reveals the numerical value of visitors to the museum between 2000 to 2005. The units are measured based on annual entries in millions.
Overall
, the graph illustrates that every year there is a surge in the number of people in the three
museums
, especially in the National, China.
As is presented in the chart, among the three
museums
, China's museum growth is remarkable touching nearly 16 million
in 2005 from 6 million
in 2000. It is crystal clear that from the year ,2000 all three
museums
have maintained their visitors with a minimum of 6 million
annually.
Moreover
, the MET and Edo museums
attracted more travellers at the beginning of the twenty-first century and plunged to below 10 million
visitors in 2002. According to
the data shown in the chart, Edo-Tokyo reduced the number of foreigners from nearly 14 million
to below 10 million
.
In conclusion, the three
museums
are working their best to attract world tourists after the year 2003.Submitted by devika.mohanan on
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