The graph bellow shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2010.
The bar graph compares, the total number of guests visited between the
years
2000 and 2005 in three different museums.
To summarize, in the given period, the crowds visited the museum were averagely minimal in National, China
followed by MET, New York
and Edo
, Tokyo.
In the year 2000, in Edo
,Tokyo 13 million
visitors
were noticed while
, in MET at New York
12 million
visitors
and in National, China
6 million
. Further
, in the years
2001 and 2002, 6 million
annual visitors
were recorded in MET, New York
whereas
, older history was maintained for Edo
in 2001 and reduced in the next year. Likewise
, the 7.8 million
in National China
, thus
gradually increased in the next few years
and the same was witnessed in the years
2003 and 2004. On the contrary
, in the years
2003 and 2004, a slight decrease and rise occurred in Edo
, Tokyo similarly
, a rapid incline was captured in MET, New York
. Finally
, at the end
of the year 2005, all three profited with the huge number of visitors
where National, China
was 15.5 million
observed and the reset were negligible.Submitted by gs250485 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, china, york, edo, million, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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