The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
The table compares teachers’
income
in five countries in 2009. Overall
, teachers in Luxembourg were the best well-paid at all times. Besides
this
, whereas
Denmark
had the second highest beginner salary
, its increase over the years
did not reach the salary
of Korea
and Japan
, which experienced the second and third highest maximum income
respectively. In addition
to this
, Australia had the lowest income
for educators. Regarding the number of years
needed to reach the maximum income
, Denmark
and Australia needed less time than the other countries, in which Japan
took the longest time to get it, followed by Korea
and finally
by Luxembourg.
To begin
with, the highest incomes were of Luxembourg, Japan
and Korea
. In the first country, the salary
for beginners was $80,000, increasing to $119,000 after 15 years
and rising to $132,000 after another 15 years
. In the case of Japan
, its salary
started at $34,000, going up to $65,000 after 15 years
, reaching its maximum income
of $86,000 after another 17 years
. Furthermore
, even if Korea
started at $30,000, half of Denmark
, after 15 years
, its salary
used to increase to $48,000 and then
to reach its maximum peak, another 19 years
needed to pass in order to get $62,000.
On the other hand
, teachers in Australia earned $28,000 at the beginning, increasing their salary
to $48,000 after 9 years
, which was their maximum salary
. Regarding Denmark
, the income
for educators was $45,000, reaching $54,000 after 8 years
, which also
was their maximum income
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