The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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The table compares teachers’
income
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in five countries in 2009.
Overall
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, teachers in Luxembourg were the best well-paid at all times.
Besides
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this
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,
whereas
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Denmark
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had the second highest beginner
salary
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, its increase over the
years
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did not reach the
salary
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of
Korea
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and
Japan
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, which experienced the second and third highest maximum
income
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respectively.
In addition
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to
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, Australia had the lowest
income
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for educators. Regarding the number of
years
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needed to reach the maximum
income
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,
Denmark
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and Australia needed less time than the other countries, in which
Japan
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took the longest time to get it, followed by
Korea
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and
finally
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by Luxembourg.
To begin
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with, the highest incomes were of Luxembourg,
Japan
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and
Korea
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. In the first country, the
salary
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for beginners was $80,000, increasing to $119,000 after 15
years
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and rising to $132,000 after another 15
years
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. In the case of
Japan
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, its
salary
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started at $34,000, going up to $65,000 after 15
years
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, reaching its maximum
income
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of $86,000 after another 17
years
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.
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, even if
Korea
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started at $30,000, half of
Denmark
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, after 15
years
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, its
salary
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used to increase to $48,000 and
then
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to reach its maximum peak, another 19
years
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needed to pass in order to get $62,000.
On the other hand
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, teachers in Australia earned $28,000 at the beginning, increasing their
salary
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to $48,000 after 9
years
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, which was their maximum
salary
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. Regarding
Denmark
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, the
income
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for educators was $45,000, reaching $54,000 after 8
years
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, which
also
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was their maximum
income
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, denmark, salary, years, korea, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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