The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
The table compares teachers’
income
in five countries in 2009. Use synonyms
Overall
, teachers in Luxembourg were the best well-paid at all times. Linking Words
Besides
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whereas
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Denmark
had the second highest beginner Use synonyms
salary
, its increase over the Use synonyms
years
did not reach the Use synonyms
salary
of Use synonyms
Korea
and Use synonyms
Japan
, which experienced the second and third highest maximum Use synonyms
income
respectively. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, Australia had the lowest Linking Words
income
for educators. Regarding the number of Use synonyms
years
needed to reach the maximum Use synonyms
income
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Denmark
and Australia needed less time than the other countries, in which Use synonyms
Japan
took the longest time to get it, followed by Use synonyms
Korea
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finally
by Luxembourg.
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To begin
with, the highest incomes were of Luxembourg, Linking Words
Japan
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Korea
. In the first country, the Use synonyms
salary
for beginners was $80,000, increasing to $119,000 after 15 Use synonyms
years
and rising to $132,000 after another 15 Use synonyms
years
. In the case of Use synonyms
Japan
, its Use synonyms
salary
started at $34,000, going up to $65,000 after 15 Use synonyms
years
, reaching its maximum Use synonyms
income
of $86,000 after another 17 Use synonyms
years
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Furthermore
, even if Linking Words
Korea
started at $30,000, half of Use synonyms
Denmark
, after 15 Use synonyms
years
, its Use synonyms
salary
used to increase to $48,000 and Use synonyms
then
to reach its maximum peak, another 19 Linking Words
years
needed to pass in order to get $62,000.
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On the other hand
, teachers in Australia earned $28,000 at the beginning, increasing their Linking Words
salary
to $48,000 after 9 Use synonyms
years
, which was their maximum Use synonyms
salary
. Regarding Use synonyms
Denmark
, the Use synonyms
income
for educators was $45,000, reaching $54,000 after 8 Use synonyms
years
, which Use synonyms
also
was their maximum Linking Words
income
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