The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the annual income of language-related jobs i.
e
.
interpreters
, translators and language teachers in five different cities in which Mexico, Dubai,
Paris
,
Munich
and
Toronto
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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included.
Overall
,
earnings
Correct article usage
the earnings
show examples
of
interpreters
are usually high in all the cities except Mexico. The highest salary of
interpreters
is in
Toronto
i.
e
. 80,000
dollars
per annum
while
in
Toronto
, the other two job's earning is the same i.
e
. 65,000
dollars
.
Munich
also
pays high salaries to
interpreters
. In
Paris
and Dubai,
interpreters
are not the only one who earns the highest salaries.
Furthermore
, the second highest paid job in
Paris
and
Munich
is
translator's
Correct article usage
a translator's
show examples
job i.
e
. 65,000
dollars
annually.
Lastly
, language teachers earn
equal
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equally
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to
Change preposition
as
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translators in
Toronto
. And in Dubai, they earn equal to
interpreters
.
While in
Correct word choice
In
show examples
Paris
and
Munich
, language teachers' annual salary is least comparatively.
In addition
, the salaries of all three jobs in Mexico are very low and do not exceed around 18,000
dollars
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words e, interpreters, paris, munich, toronto, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • languages-related jobs
  • US dollars
  • five cities
  • highest income
  • lowest income
  • average income
  • significantly higher
  • second highest
  • one-fourth
  • gradual increase
  • variations
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