The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the annual income of language-related jobs i.e
. interpreters
, translators and language teachers in five different cities in which Mexico, Dubai, Paris
, Munich
and Toronto
is
included.
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are
Overall
, earnings
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the earnings
interpreters
are usually high in all the cities except Mexico. The highest salary of interpreters
is in Toronto
i.e
. 80,000 dollars
per annum while
in Toronto
, the other two job's earning is the same i.e
. 65,000 dollars
. Munich
also
pays high salaries to interpreters
. In Paris
and Dubai, interpreters
are not the only one who earns the highest salaries.
Furthermore
, the second highest paid job in Paris
and Munich
is translator's
job i.Correct article usage
a translator's
e
. 65,000 dollars
annually. Lastly
, language teachers earn equal
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equally
to
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as
Toronto
. And in Dubai, they earn equal to interpreters
. While in
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In
Paris
and Munich
, language teachers' annual salary is least comparatively.
In addition
, the salaries of all three jobs in Mexico are very low and do not exceed around 18,000 dollars
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