The tow maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The maps show the various
changes
at the city hospital over 3 years from 2007 to 2010. Overall
it can be seen that, the majority of the changes
occurred in three specific area: a new bus
station
, two roundabouts, and a separate car
paek for public access.
The maps show the various changes
at the city hospital over 3 years from 2007 to 2010. Overall
it can be seen that, the majority of the changes
occurred in three specific area: a new bus
station
, two roundabouts, and a separate car
park
for public access.
To begin
with, in 2007, three bus
stops were presented on either side
of Hospital Road
. However
, these were removed in 2010, and a new bus
station
was established on the west side
of Hospital Road
. Moreover
, to access the bus
station
, two new roundabouts were constructed - the first located at the intersection of City Road
and Hospital Road
, and the second one is at the end
of the Hospital Road
, connecting to the Ring Road
.
Furthermore
, the maps highlight modifications made to parking areas used by staff and visitors. In 2007, the same car
park
was used by both staff and visitors, situated on the eastern side
of Hospital Road
and accessible via the Ring Road
. However
, by 2010, the original car
park
was designed for the staff only, and the new car
park
was established on the eastern side
of the ring road
to accommodate public parking.Submitted by ppamiiga on
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