Write about the following topic: In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Somepeople say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Otherpeople think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

With the development of medical and living qualities,

individuals

can significantly live longer than

previously

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living conditions.

However

, with the increasing of aged

individuals

in

society

, several social problems obliviously affect the

government

and provide external pressures in myriad perspectives in our dailies. At the same time, some

individuals

still opine that aged

individuals

can bring benefits to

society

with a positive stance. The aged

individuals

can bring myriad issues and drawbacks to our

society

. The first significant drawback is the pressure on the healthcare system. With the increase of aged

individuals

, the

government

finance needs to provide more welfare for elderly people.

Besides

,

government

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the government

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needs to establish more convenience

service

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services

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and elderly

centers

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for amusement and living convenience. It indicates that the

government

needs to put more money into

infrastructure

. The second potential issue is that

labors

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in

society

become less, and wages of

labors

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are merited to have a higher standard than before. Meanwhile, the

government

also

needs to supply a better

caring

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system for these

labors

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labourers

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.

Besides

, some of the occupations which are painstaking would not be full and need more

individuals

to do these kinds of laborious work.

However

, there are

also

some obvious and significant advantages with more aged people. The index of population

aging

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ageing

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indicates the developed degree of a country. The first matter is,

although

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that although

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the

government

need the time and money

to

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for

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infrastructure

, living quality and situation become more comfortable compared to previous.

Besides

,

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an individual

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individual

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individuals

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living longer indicates the health condition of

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the self

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self body

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becomes stronger and hale, and the age of retirement would be put off than previous and utilize

laborers

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labourers

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for longer. With the more aged

individual's

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individuals

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related to the young workers and young people, the working pressure is not stressed compared to the aged individual's working period at that particularized period. The current

labor

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labour

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price becomes higher, and the

government

can import

laborers

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labourers

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and workers from developing countries and contribute to the construction of

infrastructure

with lower prices and financial payments.

Although

population

aging

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ageing

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brings some issues and pressure on the

government

, some of the implements and methods can solve the problem by importing

laborers

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labourers

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and improving the

infrastructure

and living quality of the country.