The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
This
line graph illustrates 3 different types of crime rates in Manchester city centre in 10-year
period. Add an article
a 10-year
the 10-year
Overall
, we can see that the number of reports of Burglary and Car theft is higher than Robbery.
Firstly
, For Car theft, the rate started with
less than 2,500 in 2003 Change preposition
at
then
faced a fluctuation until 2008. After that, the trend gradually rose to 2,800 in 2012. However
, there was a different behaviour in Burglary. Despite the upward trend in the first year and second year which was a peak of all records, the records significantly dipped down from more than 3800 and hit the lowest point in 2008 at about 1100. The records increased a little bit to around 1500 in 2009 then
remained the same until 2012.
Lastly
, although
there were many changes in Burglary and Car theft the behaviour in Robbery did not change much. The highest point of this
type was in 2005 around 1000 then
was a fluctuation for 7 years to 2012.Submitted by shayakornsupasatit on
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