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You have seen an advertisement for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at a factory. You want to apply for this job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - talk about your educational background - describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job - explain why you want to work for that company.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing great. I am writing
this
 letter to enquire about the job vacancy of Quality Assurance Manager advertised in the Times of India magazine on 15th February. I think I am an eligible candidate for
this
 post as I have all the necessary skills and knowledge for
this
 job. I have a bachelor's degree in mechanical engineering, which is a suitable qualification for
this
 job.
Moreover
, I am
also
 pursuing an MBA in Quality Management for detailed knowledge, which can be beneficial for working on your premises.
Moreover
, I
also
 worked for two years as a Quality Inspector in an international company
as well as
 a one-year training during my bachelor's degree. So, I can
also
 deal with your international customers which makes me a perfect candidate for
this
 post. Apart from being one of the top ten manufacturing firms in the world, working in
this
 industry is my lifelong dream.
Moreover
, it would be an honour for me to work with
such
 a prestigious firm. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Tajinder Singh
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coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear and logical structure throughout the letter, with each paragraph dedicated to a specific point mentioned in the task.
coherence cohesion
Make use of a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow between ideas and sentences within paragraphs.
task achievement
Maintain a strong focus on the task requirements by providing sufficient detail for each point you need to address, such as elaborating more specifically on how your skills and experiences make you an ideal candidate.
task achievement
Keep a formal and polite tone throughout the letter suitable for a job application to a potential employer.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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