The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the changing
ratio
of crimes in the
inner Newport Correct article usage
apply
city
between 2003 to 2012 in 3 different types of crimes ( Capitalize word
City
burglary
, car
theft
and robbery).
Overall
, the proptions
undergo numerous changes . The percentage of Correct your spelling
proportions
proportion
burglary
was
significantly decreased in the given period, Unnecessary verb
apply
while
car
theft
and bobbery
Correct your spelling
robbery
ones
stayed sustainably.
In the case of Correct pronoun usage
apply
burglary
,the number
of incidents was abot
3500, which was increased to Correct your spelling
about
near
4000 in 2004, which was the Change the word
nearly
highes
report of that time. After that, Correct your spelling
highest
the
Correct article usage
apply
burglary
crime was
significantly declined and rich Unnecessary verb
apply
it's
Correct your spelling
its
least
Correct word choice
lowest
number
in 2008, with just over 1000 incidents. Between 2008 and 20012, the number
of burglary
had some fluctuation, with almost similar numbers in 2008 and 2012, with about 1500.
The Change to a plural noun
burglaries
ratio
of theft
from the person was almost 500 in 2003, which was the Fix the agreement mistake
thefts
least
Correct word choice
lowest
number
in that given period, while
the ratio
of car
theft
was five time
more Change to a plural noun
times
that
Correct word choice
than
robbery
with approximately 3000. In the next two Fix the agreement mistake
robberies
following
years, the Verb problem
apply
number
of robbery was
gradually rose, Wrong verb form
robberies
while
the number
of car
theft
Fix the agreement mistake
thefts
was
gradually declined with around 1000 and 2700 respectively. Between 2006 and 2007, the Unnecessary verb
apply
car
theft
ratio
over took
the Correct your spelling
overtook
burglary
rate at about 2000. For the next 5 years, both numbers had some fluctuations, but they follow
a similar trend and stayed Wrong verb form
followed
in
almost 500 and 3000, just similar Change preposition
at
the
Change preposition
to the
fist
year.Correct your spelling
first
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, burglary, car, theft, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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