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The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagram gives information about five writing systems used throughout the world: Logographic, Abjad, Abjuda, Alphabetic and Syllabic. Four of them are similar in that characters represent sounds. Among them Abjad is the oldest. Arabic language is an example for
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 represented
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 constant. Abjuda is another
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 which used
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 for
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 constant sound plus
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 vowel sound: for an instance, Indian Devanagiri. The third
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 is Alphabetic which used in English where
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 refers to either constant or vowel sound.
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, sometimes the match of spelling and pronunciation not approximate.
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, in the syllabic
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, used Japanese Kana
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, each
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 indicates a syllable.
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 there is
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 another
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 which uses completely a different principle named Logographic. The method in
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 is representing a word. The languages used
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 as Chinese and Japanese are sharing the same writing
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 when different in spoken form. In conclusion, the diagram shows most writing systems are based on sounds.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, one, character with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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