Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
There is no denying the fact that the quality of the system education is important we must
to
improve it. Change the verb form
apply
While
it is a commonly held belief that school
should not give any Fix the agreement mistake
schools
homework
for
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to
the
students, there is Correct article usage
apply
also
an argument that homework
is crucial
thing for our children. Add an article
a crucial
the crucial
This
essay will analyse this
topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
On the one hand, we have to agree that the only place that children can learn is schools, they can do their homework
just in the right place. In other words
, the house is the place to get off from a
long hours of learning. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
In addition
, the youngs
ought to learn other things and have Correct your spelling
young
a
free time to do what they like. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, they can hang out with their friends to play football or visit a museum if they would.
On the other hand
, taking a
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apply
homework
can teach them how to work hard and teach them that there is
times for play and there Change the verb form
are
is
times for work and study. It is Change the verb form
are
also
possible to say that, if we worked
hard we will get what we want and achieve our goals in the future. Wrong verb form
work
Moreover
, if we did
our Wrong verb form
do
homework
we will not forget what we learned in the
school. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, my brother Anas was
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had
do
his Wrong verb form
done
homework
before and he always get
a low score, but when he Wrong verb form
got
start
to do his Wrong verb form
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homework
he start
to be the first Wrong verb form
started
of
his class.
In conclusion, there is no easy answer to Change preposition
in
this
question. On balance, however
, I tend to believe that homework
is critical, and we better
if we do more to improve our Add a missing verb
do better
educational’s
system.Change noun form
educational
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