The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant. Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12

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number

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of trips that children,

age

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of

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apply

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5 to 12, using types of means,

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as car passenger, walking, cycling, walking

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bus, and bus,

with

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in

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1990 and 2010 respectively. Units

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are

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measured in

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.

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, it can be clearly seen that the sector of walking acquired

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the highest

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deal in1990,

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lowest

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the lowest

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category is car

passenger

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passengers

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in the same period, which

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apply

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experienced

top

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at top

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of the

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in

second

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the second

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survey. In

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apply

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terms of the year

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1990

that

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the first investigation, Having greatest amount is walking, recording over 12

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millions

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million

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,

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that of 2010

gain

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gained

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6

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millions

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million

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, which is a half

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in

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difference.

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,

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amount is almost

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the same

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deal with the way of cycling and walking and bus from 1990. Regarding the survey result in 2010, in

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year, all

sector

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sectors

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are dropped down without car passenger area.

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category which

having

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has

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only

difference

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a difference

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feature in 2010’s data

obtain

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obtained

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approximately 4

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millions

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million

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in

first

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the first

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investigation, which

be

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able to explain that

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is

lowest

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number

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.

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, in the second search,

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topic moved to around 11

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millions

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million

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and it

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recoded

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recorded

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highest

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the highest

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score in 2010.