The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school in 1990 and 2010 using various modes of transport. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant. Travel to and from school by children aged 5-12
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The given bar graph illustrates data related to the
number
of trips that children, age
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aged
of
5 to 12, using types of means, Change preposition
apply
such
as car passenger, walking, cycling, walking and
bus, and bus, Correct word choice
apply
with
1990 and 2010 respectively. Units Change preposition
in
is
measured in Change the verb form
are
millions
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the sector of walking acquired highest
deal in1990, Change the article
the highest
while
lowest
category is car Add an article
the lowest
passenger
in the same period, which Fix the agreement mistake
passengers
is
experienced Unnecessary verb
apply
top
of the Change preposition
at top
number
in second
survey.
In Change the article
the second
the
terms of the year Correct article usage
apply
of
1990 Change preposition
apply
that
the first investigation, Having greatest amount is walking, recording over 12 Correct word choice
apply
millions
, Change to singular
million
whereas
that of 2010 gain
6 Wrong verb form
gained
millions
, which is a half Fix the agreement mistake
million
number
in
difference. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, this
amount is almost same
deal with the way of cycling and walking and bus from 1990.
Regarding the survey result in 2010, in Correct article usage
the same
this
year, all sector
are dropped down without car passenger area. Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
This
category which having
only Wrong verb form
has
difference
feature in 2010’s data Correct article usage
a difference
obtain
approximately 4 Wrong verb form
obtained
millions
in Change to singular
million
first
investigation, which Change the article
the first
be
able to explain that Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
is lowest
Change the article
the lowest
number
. However
, in the second search, this
topic moved to around 11 millions
and it Change to singular
million
also
recoded
Correct your spelling
recorded
highest
score in 2010.Change the article
the highest
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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