Many museums charge admission fee while others are free. Do the advantage of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantage?
Nowadays, many
museums
decide to place an entrance Use synonyms
fee
but the rest insist on being a free visit. Charging Use synonyms
visitors
has the advantage of providing the Use synonyms
museum
with more budget that will allow them to prepare high-quality shows and services for the customers. Use synonyms
However
, fewer Linking Words
people
would think of visiting those Use synonyms
museums
in their leisure time. I personally think it is not worth risking the Use synonyms
popularity
of Use synonyms
museums
in favour of receiving more Use synonyms
money
and levelling up the services.
On the bright side, the extra Use synonyms
money
the Use synonyms
visitors
pay would be returned to them in the shape of more preparations, drinks and snacks, and a cleaner environment. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
this
better quality Linking Words
service
leads to more Use synonyms
visitors
and more chances of bringing Use synonyms
people
to the Use synonyms
museums
which is the ultimate goal of these organizations. Use synonyms
For example
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last
year, the National Linking Words
Museum
of Agriculture in Iran suddenly decided to put a charge for admission. Surprisingly, Use synonyms
this
led to more Linking Words
people
wanting to experience their shows and increased the attention agriculture was receiving in Iran. Use synonyms
Hence
, the decision to charge Linking Words
people
per visit, could ,in fact, result in the growth of Use synonyms
museums
' Use synonyms
popularity
.
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However
, it will reduce the chance of random folk visiting the Linking Words
museum
when they are bored. Indeed, a small Use synonyms
fee
would not prevent too many Use synonyms
people
from visiting. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the fact that a Linking Words
service
is not free, even though the Use synonyms
fee
is small, will induce negative thoughts in the minds of some Use synonyms
people
and Use synonyms
thus
, reduce their Linking Words
popularity
in the end. One instance is when a Use synonyms
museum
in one of the lower-privileged neighbourhoods changed its business plan to have an admission Use synonyms
fee
. The Use synonyms
people
who were used to spending their afternoons in that Use synonyms
museum
and having fun Use synonyms
while
learning were outraged and started protesting. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
this
led to a plummet in the Linking Words
popularity
of Use synonyms
museums
. Use synonyms
Hence
, without considering the side effects Linking Words
this
decision has, Linking Words
museums
might risk their Use synonyms
popularity
.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
museums
face the question of whether to put an admission Use synonyms
fee
on their Use synonyms
service
or not. Even though they could use Use synonyms
this
extra Linking Words
money
to upgrade their quality of Use synonyms
service
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also
satisfy their customers, they risk losing their more frequent Linking Words
visitors
and indeed, might be damaging their own reputation. In my opinion, Use synonyms
museums
should ask their funders for more Use synonyms
money
and not turn their back on their usual Use synonyms
visitors
but in the end, it is up to them to decide.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...