The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
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of individuals participating in 4 types of sports in a specific region in the years 1985 and 2005.
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, Rugby was the most popular sport in 1985 and declined in 2005, the same with Badminton. Tennis was second in rank and reached the top in 2005. Basketball and Badminton were the
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two sports that had the same trend throughout the 2 decade period at third and fourth place respectively. In 1985, Rugby had the highest number of participants at around 250, where it steadily decreased in the year 1995 with 200 participants reaching its lowest point in 2005 at 50. Tennis, next in line had 150 people who participated in the year 1985, and had a gradual increase reaching its peak of more than 200 people. In comparison, Basketball and Badminton, as third and fourth rank just hover
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period, having only 50-100 participants.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • participation
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • decrease
  • stability
  • popularity
  • regional interest
  • key trends
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • local leagues
  • school programs
  • media influence
  • public health initiatives
  • availability of facilities
  • competitive success
  • fluctuations
  • impact
  • major tournaments
  • notable players
  • local clubs
  • coaching programs
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