The graph below shows the number of short-term vistors to Austrilia from 4 different countries from 2010-2017.
The bar graph illustrates the number of people arriving
to
Australia as Change preposition
in
visitors
from four different countries over an eight year
period. Add a hyphen
eight-year
Overall
, the highest figures of visitors
arriving to Australia are from China and New Zealand, with both countries experienced
similar statistics in the remaining two years. The USA remained consistent until 2015 Wrong verb form
experiencing
where
there was a subtle increase and Correct word choice
when
visitors
arriving from Japan fluctuated.
New Zealand's are
the highest figures among other countries, it increased from 1.2 to 1.4 million by the end of the period. Unnecessary verb
apply
This
was overtaken by the Chinese in 2016 with more than 1.4 million tourists, which is seven times more than in 2010.
American's
visiting Australia remained consistent with 600,000 Change noun form
Americans
visitors
before witnessed
a slight increase of 50,000 for the remaining two years. Arrivals from Japan Wrong verb form
witnessing
was
the lowest with a quarter of a million people visiting, which fluctuated before reaching Correct subject-verb agreement
were
peak
in 2017.Add an article
a peak
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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