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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided table shows subway
system
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 statistics for six distinct cities.
Overall
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, London has the earliest
metro
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system
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,
while
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Los
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Angeles
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 has established the
metro
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 just recently.
Additionally
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, Tokyo represents the highest amount of
passengers
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 per year.
To begin
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, London's
metro
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 is the oldest, built in 1863, followed by Paris and Tokyo, in 1900 and 1927, respectively.
In contrast
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, the newest subway
system
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 is located in
Los
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Angeles
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, opened in 2001. In terms of route length, London has the longest track, at 399 kilometres.
On the other hand
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, Kyoto has the shortest one, at 11, followed by
Los
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Angeles
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 at 28. Only 45
passengers
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 use the
metro
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 in Kyoto, followed by 50 in
Los
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Angeles
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.
Conversely
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, in Tokyo, 1191 people take the train annually, representing the highest number of
passengers
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. It can be concluded that the newest railway
system
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 has a shorter route and fewer
passengers
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 per year.
However
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, the same cannot be said for the oldest railway
system
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, as Paris has the highest annual ridership, despite being the second-oldest
metro
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 among the five others.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words system, metro, los, angeles, passengers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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