The maps below show the future plan about the Biology school in a particular university.

The maps below show the future plan about the Biology school in a particular university.
The maps illustrate the future plan of reconstructing the Biology
School
of a particular university.
Overall
, the
school
will undergo massive changes, especially the removal of green spaces,
as well as
the construction of more working and educational places. On the southwestern side of the maps, the wooded area will be totally replaced by car parking spaces for
school
workers.
Additionally
, the forest on the north will
also
be partly cut down and converted into a laboratory and an office,
while
the indoor sports hall next to that will remain the same. The next change will be the conversion of the
school
drama centre into a music centre. The teaching facilities like the teaching building and the lecture room will be extended, with more blocks being built. The final change of the
school
will be the enlargement of the IT centre.
On the other hand
, just like the sports hall, the cafeteria will not receive any change.
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