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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph depicts the information regarding the average money spent yearly on cell
phone
 and residential
phone
services
 from 2001 to 2010.
Overall
, expenses consumed by the landline
phone
 decreased in the period considered
while
 the reverse trend was shown by the mobile
phone
services
.
To begin
 with mobile
phone
services
, in 2001, consumers spent nearly 200
dollars
 which increased to 300
dollars
 in the next
year
 followed by a very feeble increment in the
year
 2003. After that
year
, the service amount inclined steadily till 2007, reaching $600.
However
, in the subsequent
year
 ,there was a slight decline and later the value geared up and touched approximately 700
dollars
 in the final
year
 of the considered period. It is evident that, in residential
services
, people gave the maximum amount of 700
dollars
 per month in the
year
 2001.Following that
year
, there was
continuous
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 decline in the rate given for the
services
 to $550 in 2007, but in the
year
 2008 , the service rate rose by a small currency value and showed a decreasing figure in all the upcoming years of the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, services, dollars, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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