People buy a product if it fulfils their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
The need for various items will differ from one person to another.
Besides
that
there are a number of Add a comma
,that
adds
on the market that promote even the basic necessities of human life. I partially disagree Correct your spelling
ads
to
Change preposition
with
fact
of not needing advertisements Add an article
the fact
in
certain Change preposition
for
products
.
Commercials are produced in certain
way that helps in educating people about the items they are unaware of. Add an article
a certain
To begin
with , there is a vast diversity in the range of products
that individuals use on a day-to-day basis, but , they have no idea of the composition of the products
and what they are used for. In that case, promotions come into action , thereby, providing folks with knowledge regarding the wide range and how it is manufactured. For instance
, there are many toothpaste brands out there on the market , but people are not acquainted with the benefits and different purposes Change preposition
of
on
how it is being utilized . Change preposition
of
Following
this
, individuals will get to know information about the paste only through commercials.
However
, a huge population prefer to stick to same
Correct article usage
the same
products
they have been using all their life and have no reason to change it
as it works for them . In that case , advertisements are of no use and folks prefer not to watch unnecessary broadcasting. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, my mother has been using Head and shoulders shampoo for the past decade and she does not care to watch any promotion related to shampoo because she has no idea of changing it.
In conclusion, I believe, Correct word choice
that adds
adds
regarding any object used in daily life Correct your spelling
ads
is
important for those who have no knowledge in regard to the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
products
and what they are used for. Yet, it is the individual's choice to not watch it.Submitted by insighttribez on
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