The tables show how many international student studies in canada and the united states by country of origin

The tables show how many international student studies in canada and the united states by country of origin
The display tables describe how many international students
studies
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in Canada and the United States by country of origin.
Firstly
,In Canada, in
China
, in the
year
2002, it was 5400, in the
USA
in the
year
2002 it was 5000, in
India
in the
year
2002 it was 2100 and the total of the
year
2002
it
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was 59870. In the
year
2003, in
China
it was 7850, in the
USA
it was 5450, in
India
it was 2835 and the total was 70004. The
change
in
China
was +45%, in the
USA
it was +9%, in
India
it was +35% and the total was +17%.
Secondly
,In the
USA
, in
China
, in the
year
2002
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,2002
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it was 110000 and in 2003 it was 116600 and the
change
was +6%.
Thirdly
, In
India
, in the
year
2002
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,2002
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it was 200000, in the
year
2003 it was 182000 and
change
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the change
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is -9%, in Canada, in the
year
2002, it was 31000, but in the
year
2003 it was 33170 and the
change
was +7%. The total in 2002 was 581600, in the
year
2003 it was 592230 and the
change
was +2%.
To conclude
, the above information describes the data about the
year
2002
as well as
2003.
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