The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The table provides information about how many tourists travel in the international countries from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, it is obvious from the graph that we have an increasing trend over the significant period. Europe was the most visited area among the other destinations.
In 1990, the most famous areas
were Europe and America and Asia and the Pacific with statistics numbers
280.2 , 80.5 and 60.2, respectively. Also
, the least visited areas
were the Middle East and Africa with survey numbers
9.8 and 18.2 million
of travellers. Then
, we continued with the 1995 year when the same areas
were the most popular and the least famous again with 390.3 ,112.5 and 80.3 and 11.3 and 20.8 million
travellers .
In 2000, the most famous areas
were Europe and America and Asia and the Pacific with statistics numbers
393.2 , 118.2 and 117.4, respectively. In addition
, the least visited areas
were the Middle East and Africa with survey numbers
of 13.5 and 26.9 million
travellers. Moreover
, we continued with the 2005 year when the same areas
were the most popular again with 400.2 ,113.2 and 135.8 and 15.8 and 28.7 million
tourists.Submitted by despinaiapona on
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