The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.
The tables
illustrates
the information about five Change the verb form
illustrate
European
countries
monetary Change noun form
countries'
the
fairtrade-labelled coffee and Correct article usage
apply
bananas
in 1999 and 2004.
As an overview, In European
countries coffee and bananas
are
highly exported in 2004, Wrong verb form
were
while
compare
to 1999 Change the form of the verb
compared
bananas
sales are
increased in Unnecessary verb
apply
switzeland
in 2004.
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Switzerland
To begin
with, The United kingdom
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Kingdom
trading
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traded
coffe
in 1999 at 1.5 Correct your spelling
coffee
millions
and in Change to singular
million
next
five Correct article usage
the next
years
trade Add a comma
,years
increases
rapidly to 20 Wrong verb form
increased
millions
.Change to singular
million
Secondally
, Switzerland Correct your spelling
Secondly
have been selling
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sold
coffe
at 3 Correct your spelling
coffee
millions
in 1999, Change to singular
million
while
compared to 2004 it grows
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has
double
. Wrong verb form
doubled
Thirdly
, Denmark
in 1999 Change preposition
in Denmark
coffe
was Correct your spelling
coffee
sailed
at 1.8 Verb problem
sold
millions
and in 200 it leapted up to 2 Change to singular
million
millions
.Change to singular
million
However
,Belgium has selled
1 Correct your spelling
sold
milions
in 1999 Correct your spelling
million
millions
while
scanning in 2004 it increases
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increased
1,7
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by 1,7
millions
. Change to singular
million
Finally
, Sweden has the lowest trading european
countries in 1999 and 2004. I
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European
In addition
, Switzerland has selled
15 Correct your spelling
sold
million
in 1999 sudenlly
it Correct your spelling
suddenly
increases
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increased
47
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to 47
million
in 2004. However
, The United Kingdom
sales Change noun form
Kingdom's
bananas
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of bananas
1
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were 1
million
in 1999 and in 2004 soared up
to 5.5 Change preposition
apply
million
. Thirdly
, Belgium has been
Wrong verb form
had
selled
low level of Correct your spelling
a
bananas
in 1999, while
relate
to other nations Verb problem
compared
and
it Correct word choice
apply
raised
to 4 Verb problem
rose
million
in 2004. Moreover
, Sweden has
traded Unnecessary verb
apply
the
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apply
bananas
to
1.8 Change preposition
for
million
in 1999 while
study to 2004 it down
to 1 Add a missing verb
was down
millions
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million
of
euros. Change preposition
apply
additionally
, Denmark Capitalize word
Additionally
has supplying
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supplied
the
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apply
bananas
at 0.8 million
in 2004 while
link
to other nations it Wrong verb form
linked
has
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had
the
small trade in Correct article usage
a
european
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European
unions
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unions'
union's
histoery
, respectively.Correct your spelling
history
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