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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries.
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The tables
illustrates
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 the information about five
European
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countries
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countries'
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 monetary
the
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fairtrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
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 in 1999 and 2004. As an overview, In
European
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 countries coffee and
bananas
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are
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were
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 highly exported in 2004,
while
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compare
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compared
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 to 1999
bananas
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 sales
are
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increased in
switzeland
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Switzerland
 in 2004.
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 with, The United
kingdom
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trading
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traded
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coffe
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coffee
 in 1999 at 1.5
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millions
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million
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 and in
next
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the next
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 five
years
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 trade
increases
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increased
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 rapidly to 20
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millions
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million
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.
Secondally
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, Switzerland
have been selling
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sold
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coffe
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coffee
 at 3
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millions
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million
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 in 1999,
while
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 compared to 2004 it
grows
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double
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doubled
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.
Thirdly
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,
Denmark
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in Denmark
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 in 1999
coffe
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coffee
 was
sailed
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sold
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 at 1.8
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millions
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million
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 and in 200 it leapted up to 2
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millions
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million
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.
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,Belgium has
selled
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sold
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 1
milions
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million
millions
 in 1999
while
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 scanning in 2004 it
increases
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1,7
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by 1,7
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millions
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million
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.
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, Sweden has the lowest trading
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european
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 countries in 1999 and 2004. I
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, Switzerland has
selled
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sold
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 15
million
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 in 1999
sudenlly
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suddenly
 it
increases
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47
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million
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 in 2004.
However
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, The United
Kingdom
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Kingdom's
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 sales
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bananas
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of bananas
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1
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million
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 in 1999 and in 2004 soared
up
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to 5.5
million
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 .
Thirdly
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, Belgium
has been
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selled
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a
 low level of
bananas
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 in 1999,
while
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relate
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 to other nations
and
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it
raised
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 to 4
million
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 in 2004.
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, Sweden
has
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traded
the
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bananas
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to
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for
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 1.8
million
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 in 1999
while
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 study to 2004 it
down
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was down
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 to 1
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millions
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million
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of
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euros.
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additionally
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, Denmark
has supplying
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supplied
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the
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bananas
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 at 0.8
million
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 in 2004
while
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link
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 to other nations it
has
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had
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the
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a
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 small trade in
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european
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European
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unions
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unions'
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histoery
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history
, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, thirdly, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words european, bananas, millions, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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