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-Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

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Environmental pollution becomes worse and worse every day but, at the same time, humanity works industriously on recycling and sustainability to minimise the harmful consequences
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 as global warming and climate change. Some
people
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 say that home-made trash is not recycled efficiently and the government should intervene in
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 situation and make a new law regarding home
waste
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. In my opinion, the World’s natural
resources
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 are at their lowest and suffering. Since communities become more obeyfull when they are under the obligation of law rather than verbal rules, l entirely agree that legal heads need to make recycling a legal requirement. Through decades
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 have used the world’s
resources
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 as raw materials to produce new materials, meet the humanistic needs of
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 or just fulfil the crazy consumption habits that we, as
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humanity, have today.
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, the world is alarming
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 the lack of
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.
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, there was nearly no rain
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 year
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 extreme temperatures and our water
resources
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 have decreased and are now almost exhausted. Scientists have confirmed that we will have to face water use restrictions in the next 10 years. Some responsible
people
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 try to take precautions
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 as recycling,which is one of the most efficient ways to stop the harmful consequences, of their
waste
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 by themselves.
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, in the world today’s point, I believe, governments need to take action because
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 become more obedient when they are under the control of
laws
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 rather than just verbal community rules. If we think that we will get punished because of our actions we act more convenient
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 fear.
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 May in America, the crime rates are higher in the countries that have less punishment for the same crime.
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, the
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 need to create new
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 to make
people
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 recycle more of their
waste
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. In conclusion,
laws
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 are being created to make the world more liveable for all species so we need to create new
laws
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 to encourage
people
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 to recycle their
waste
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 since one of the world’s biggest problems is climate change and global warming.
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