In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, in many states around the world,
rural to urban
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rural-to-urban
migration
is a common phenomenon. It has some pros and cons, economically migrations make stronger
labour market, but in terms of living Correct article usage
a stronger
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standards
standard
it reduces Add a comma
,standard
standard
of living. In my opinion, it is a negative development.
On the one hand, if Add an article
the standard
large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
people
move to town from rural areas, total
number of Change the article
a total
the total
people
will be increased
rapidly. In Wrong verb form
increase
this
situation, city
authorities will be trouble
to supply basic services, Wrong verb form
troubled
for example
, accommodation, water supply, and gas. Additionally
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road traffic congestion could be an alarming issue for the Change preposition
apply
city
management officials. If migration
trend increases over Correct article usage
the migration
the
time, industrialists might be increased to establish more industries because cheap labour market. Correct article usage
apply
This
scenario will emphasis
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emphasise
migration
trend upwards. It could have Correct article usage
the migration
direct
impact on native citizens of town Add an article
a direct
such
as increasing criminal activity, high-cost living spaces, upward price rate of daily necessities.
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other
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another
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the environment
environment
will be at risk Correct article usage
the environment
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when
while
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when
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a large
large
number of Correct article usage
a large
people
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in a
a
place like Change preposition
in a
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a city
city
. To accommodate Correct article usage
a city
huge
population open spaces needed to be included in the urban area. Correct article usage
a huge
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result
, Correct article usage
a result
urban
hit Correct article usage
an urban
island
could be formed. It increases urban Fix the agreement mistake
islands
temperate
not only Correct your spelling
temperature
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in day
day time
but Correct your spelling
the daytime
also
at night. Sometimes city
authorities take initiative
to make new roads, Correct article usage
the initiative
housing
land by cutting trees. Correct word choice
and housing
As a result
amount of carbon di oxide
goes up, and it creates global warming. If Correct your spelling
dioxide
city
corporations fail to manage waste, it could have serious
impact Add an article
a serious
of
living Change preposition
on
people
in the territory by creating health issues.
In conclusion, moving urban to rural have
positive impacts it is well managed by government authorities. Wrong verb form
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However
, migration
is pragmatic
trend, it should Add an article
a pragmatic
the pragmatic
sensitize
in a controlled way.Wrong verb form
be sensitised
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