The chart below give the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The display chart gives the number of people employed in five types of work in a certain region in Australia . The below information describes the number of people employed in the
year
2001 and 2008.
The data is on some items like sales
, computing, accounting, nursing and farming in the years 2001 and 2008. In the year
2001, sales
were 180000, computing was 100000, accounting was 90000, nursing was 40000 and farming was 30000. In the year
2008, sales
were 190000, computing was 110000, accounting was around 80000, nursing was more than 50000 and farming was 20000. The highest in 2001 was in sales
and the highest in the year
2008 was also
sales
. There is some difference in the year
2001 and 2008. The data is on certain regions only.
To conclude
, the above information describes the number of people employed in Australia in the year
2001 as well as
2008.Submitted by purvaam383 on
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