The pie charts provided information about the average money spent on households in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The pie charts display the average proportions of money spent on households in Japan and
Malaysia
in 2010.
It's evident that spending on Food and Other goods and services was close to each other in both countries. Use synonyms
However
, spending on health care took Linking Words
last
place in Japan and Linking Words
Malaysia
, Japanise spent 2 times more than Malaysians.
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Malaysia
households spent the third part of the budget on Housing Use synonyms
In contrast
, those part took only 21 per Linking Words
cent
in Japan, where the most common spending is on Other goods and services with 29 per Use synonyms
cent
. Japanese had been spending about 20 per Use synonyms
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on Transport, Use synonyms
whereas
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Malaysia
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this
category took only 10 per Linking Words
cent
.
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To sum up
,those countries had similar spending in some categories, but where they had differences, these differences were significant.Linking Words
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