Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
sports
centre numbers have been increasing. They can be considered as a growing sector. They are so popular and
people
tend to believe that fitness centre membership is a must be healthy. I firmly believe that
this
is unnecessary. It is certain that a balanced life, which means having a healthy diet, exercise
such
as walking, cycling,
aerobic
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etc., and a well-managed stress level, is essential to stay healthy. There is no need to spend a big amount of money on membership. I used to have a membership in a fitness centre. I believed that I could do different kinds of exercise to feel amazing and stronger.
However
, I couldn’t go regularly to there. Whenever I was there, I didn’t feel happy
due to
the high level of noisy music and crowd. I
also
found some
people
very rude
while
dressing in changing rooms. Sometimes, I felt like a hamster who runs over the turning on mills every time. After that, I realized that walking outside made me happier compared to a
sports
club.
Nevertheless
, It is not easy to find some special facilities or activities outside,
such
as a swimming pool or doing far-east
sports
. If you need more special activities, it is necessary to attend a club.
Moreover
, some
people
like to socialise with other
people
at the gym centres. They can feel more confident and more entertained
while
doing sport there.
It is clear that
it is not necessary to attend a club for health purposes. Easy activities and small movements are just enough as an exercise.
This
should be supported with a diet which suitable for your health and life conditions.
However
, if
people
are aware of these, they can feel free attend to the
sports
centres.
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