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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation Write at least 150 words.

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Hi Annie, Hope you're well. I'm writing
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 to suggest the
place
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 where you can live in Delhi and where you can find other accommodations over the Internet. I stayed at Kamla Market's paying guests, It's an affordable and clean
place
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. Fortunately, you'd
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 get
complimentary
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 lunch and dinner. I think that you'll love
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place
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 since the manager and owner were
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 helpful and they had a friendly nature. But if you want to stay at any other
place
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, you can search for other places on an application called "Searchkaro". It's a free-of-cost application for Delhi University's students, and you'll get loads of information
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 as area and other facilities. I
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 want to aware you of the scams that some
property
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 dealers do, like some fake
property
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 dealers
ask
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 for advance over call. So, I think that you should visit the
property
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 first and
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 pay the rent and advance directly to the owner of the
property
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. Hope you'll find a good accommodation to stay. Best regards, Jaskaran
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