The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The presented maps illustrate the
island
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's development into a tourist resort over some unknown period.
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, the shown
island
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has gone through some dramatic changes. During the construction time,
this
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island
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went from being close to
the
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an
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uninhabited place to an alluring and inviting tourist hideaway. After the construction, many
of
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tourist facilities can be found on the
island
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. First of all, typical huts were built as an accommodation facility all over the west and central parts of the
island
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. In the middle of the
island
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cottages, the
reception
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is placed.
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, in the south, behind the
reception
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office, the restaurant can be seen.
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, just in front of the
reception
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, the pier was created for tourists so they could reach the
island
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.
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, the wild beach on the west coast was turned into a swimming spot. The footpath connects all the listed above facilities with each other; the vehicle track,
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, connects the pier, the
reception
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, and the restaurant. The
island
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's east side stays
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untended.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, reception with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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