You live near a record shop that sells music, movies, and books. Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items you are looking for. – Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders – Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance

Dear Sir, My name is Erikson and I am one of the residents living near your rental store. I came across your store many times but I did not have the opportunity to pay a visit there.
, I would like to make an enquiry about what you offer since from what I have heard from the neighbours, you are selling or renting audio and video records and
books. I am a big fan of documentaries or biographies about a character or life in the country in the Second World War. I would like to know if you have any recommendations on books or movies made about that period of time.
, may I have the information on the prices and the order process?
Due to
the fact that I may not be able to visit on-site, do you have a website or Facebook page where I can browse for the material to make a purchase?
In addition
to the price question, either via a purchase or a rent, I
would like to know if you can do delivery. Again, I will not be able to come by the store often, It would be wonderful if you could send the books or movies through the mail. If so, will there be an additional charge for shipping?
On the other hand
, in the scenario that I can go and pick up the item, is there a way for me to reserve in advance? If
that is
something you can do, how long can you hold the item? I would be grateful if you could address my queries above to
email address. Best regards, Erikson Nguyen
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