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Some people think that government should tax unhealthy foods to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays
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 are very addicted to junk
food
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. Every street and everywhere where we can find junk
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 at affordable rates, so
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 are not hungry they just go to test the
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. For that
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 are sick very often and sometimes it causes
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huge illnesses that lead to death. Many
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 are now finding new
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 items, that are inspired by international dishes and want to themtry. The stall or store accepts strategies like
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one get one offer and attracts
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 to buy the
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,
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 the rates are very affordable so
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 are considering trying for one time. If
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 are aware of the
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 quality and hygiene, they have less chance of getting seek.
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,
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 believe that if the government implied a tax on unhealthy foods
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people
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 would buy less.
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 There are many things to do to aware
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, like giving information about the
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 how much calories, fat, sugar, and oil type and how much exercise is needed to burn that fat and be healthy. In my thought, many
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 who do not care about the rates, tend to buy junk
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, so not only the tax but other things
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 need to encourage
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 to eat healthier.
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