In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s world, people from numerous regions prefer to get pregnant and raise their first child at an older age.

This

phenomenon lies in a wide range of reasons and outcomes. In my perspective,

this

alteration gives more detrimental results rather than positive ones.

To begin

with, young generations opt to prioritize their job opportunities and career

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rather than being tied into a parental commitment. As being efficient and productive, it is comprehensible to devote and take full advantage of their youth until they have prosperous financial conditions.

Additionally

, having kids does require serious commitment and inevitably challenging custody. Parents obligatorily need to provide sufficiently and take substantial care in every aspect of their offspring’s lives. Especially, having kids simultaneously consists of taking vital roles in shaping the mindset and determining

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of a whole human being.

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abovementioned reasons, the solution of giving first birth at

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age

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. On the first hand, it brings positive points that parents can be wealthier and

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.

Thus

, the children obtain a higher quality of education and can contribute more to

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society.

Nevertheless

, that concept concurrently results in a wide range of drawbacks, especially

due to

parent's health and social structure. The process of having kids at

such

an old age exposes the parents to

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high potential of infertility and life-threatening disease.

Furthermore

, the structure of society, which relates to workforce and population structure, can be severely hindered

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effect. In conclusion, delaying taking parental roles

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later life could come from various results. Still, the downsides seemingly dominate as the outcome of

this

concept.