The bar chart below show numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the gormez straits from 2006 to 2018
The bar chart
represent
the information about Change the verb form
represents
sea
mam Mel Correct article usage
the sea
population
in Gormez straits between 2006 and 2018
Overall
, seals
and whales
experienced fluctuation in numbers. While
Dolphins showed an upward trend throughout the period. Although
Dolphins initially
had a lower rate
, it
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they
out raced
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outraced
Seals
and Whales
at the end
of the period.
Seals
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The seals
population
rate
was about 43 in 2011, being higher than other sea animal rate
by approximately 25. Fix the agreement mistake
rates
Then
it,
decreased to around 13 in 2010. Remove the comma
apply
However
, the figures showed a slight rose
in numbers to about 8 in 2014 and continued to Correct your spelling
rise
increased
steadily to the end of the period reaching around 45.
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increase
Whales
recorded number was nearly 25 in the year 2006 and constant
remained Change the adjective
constantly
same
in 2010. Correct article usage
the same
But
it experienced Correct word choice
However
decline
steady in Correct article usage
a decline
rate
2014 and by the end of year population
become about 25.
Dolphins
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The dolphins
population
in Gormez straits was nearly 18 in 2006,
and experienced Remove the comma
apply
a
steady growth during all Remove the article
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this
years. It rose to approximately 53 and remained steady, outracing the Change the determiner
these
rate
of seals
and whales
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whale populations
population
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