Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? are there more advantages than disadvatages ?

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down rather than facing straight.
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. They are addicted to it.
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spend much time in the outside environment and engage with the other members. Most of them who doing
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afraid to talk to other men or women even if they
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a reason to talk to them or if they need some help. So,
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use their mobile phones
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messages more than talking to them directly. I think we have more disadvantages than advantages here.
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is because teens are getting scared to talk with others.
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induces a lack of communication
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for the person.
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,
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use short forms for some words which may make the reader a little
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because they don't know those and
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might get a feeling of being rude to the reader.But for some
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is good. By
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we won't be disturbing other persons in their tough or busy hours , we can able to notify them when the person is unavailable, we
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have a written statement of proof etc. I believe that both texting and talking to others
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good if it is maintained at a balanced level.But we need to focus more on talking which may give more ideas and get to know how the
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