You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

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Hey Ali, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I'm still under impression of the yesterday's party at your place.

However

, I have more great news as one of the greatest music bands held a concert in the Town and I have just won a couple of tickets for the Saturday night show. I was driving to my place when the radio announced a contest for the quickest correct answer to the online quiz. As I was using the navigation map on my phone it took a couple of seconds to dial and reach the hotline and, eventually, I was the first contender. The questions weren't hard for me and now I possess two tickets for the show. Of

course

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I am aware of your music preferences and I have only you on my mind being so passionate about music. So it would be great if you accompanied me on

this

small adventure. Hope to see you soon and have a good day! Regards, Habib

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You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read ebooks rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because univerity education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that history has little or nothing to tell us but some people think that studying the past history can help us understand the present better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

1- Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?