You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter •give details about the concert •describe how you won the tickets • explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.

Hey Ali, Hope

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letter finds you well. I'm still under impression of the yesterday's party at your place.

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, I have more great news as one of the greatest music bands held a concert in the Town and I have just won a couple of tickets for the Saturday night show. I was driving to my place when the radio announced a contest for the quickest correct answer to the online quiz. As I was using the navigation map on my phone it took a couple of seconds to dial and reach the hotline and, eventually, I was the first contender. The questions weren't hard for me and now I possess two tickets for the show. Of

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I am aware of your music preferences and I have only you on my mind being so passionate about music. So it would be great if you accompanied me on

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small adventure. Hope to see you soon and have a good day! Regards, Habib

h.israfilovWed Sep 13 2023

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

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