Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, the environmental
problem
has become a popular topic and many
people
think it is worth discussing.
However
, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether the chief
problem
of our time in the
environment
is the lack of particular
species
of flora and fauna or the global warming is the biggest
problem
for the
environment
. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I will discuss both of the persuasions confirming why I am inclined towards the latter view that global warming is more important than the shortage of specific
species
of
plants
and
animals
.
To begin
with, nowadays the environmental
problem
is increasing day by day
such
as
air
pollution and
water
pollution.
This
can lead to global warming happening to
people
.
For example
, the fresh
air
in the world is declining because of
air
pollution and
people
need to have fresh
air
to continue live.
Therefore
, environmental problems are important not only for
people
but
also
for all living things to maintain their lives through
air
. What is more, environmental problems damage every
species
like
plants
, trees,
people
and
animals
. A good example is that
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the food source of all creatures is
water
and thanks to
water
, ıt grown up most food and
animals
and
people
eat these foods. We know that the more
plants
and threes
water
, the more growing foods for
people
and
animals
.
On the other hand
, many
people
opposed my idea . For one thing, the extinction of flora and fauna is important in my life because they can know different information.
For example
, in the past dinosaurs lived in our world but we have never seen them die out of their
species
. Another, reason for
this
is that whole
plants
and
animals
create a nutrition chain that improves the balance of nature.
Thus
, one of the
species
is declining meaning that the food chain is broken and the unbalance in the world.
For instance
,
first,
the grasshopper eats
plants
second,
the mouse eats a grasshopper,
next,
the snake diet is mouse after that the falcon nutrition is the snake. If the plant is exhausted, the whole cycle can be affected badly.
This
means that disaster. The because of the fact that maybe snakes can eat humans or crowns.
To sum up
, in spite of the fact that it is undeniable that the extinction of various
species
has taken place, the
problem
related to the
environment
is far bigger because all creatures live in the same
environment
. So, we all need to act wisely and should take steps to save nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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