The table in the above image shows the source of money for the police budget. The chart shows how it was spent. Both of these images capture data from the year 2017 to 2018.

The table in the above image shows the source of money for the police budget. The chart shows how it was spent. Both of these images capture data from the year 2017 to 2018.
The table compares, the income earned for the police budget in the
years
2017 and 2018 from various sources and the pie charts, show the amount spent in the same year. To summarize, in the given period the maximum budget was gained by the National Government followed by Local Taxes and Other sources. The money spent on salaries for officers and staff stood first in both the
years
. In the year 2017, the National Government allocated 175.5m,
while
local taxes and other sources like grants with 91.2m and 38m respectively.
Likewise
, in the year 2018, 177.8m, 102.3m and 38.5m were recorded.
However
, when summarizing both the
years
, 2018 signified the highest with 318.6m and 2017 was comparatively lower. Turning to the pie chart, the average expenditure in the category salaries specifically for officers and staff was 75% and 69% in the
years
2017 and 2018.
On the contrary
, the money spent on technology was 8% and 14%
similarly
, 17% each in building and transport facilities in the period 2017 and 2018.
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