Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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news
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them and propound that global
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can get
news
faster and better via
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media
platform
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platforms
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such
as Facebook or Instagram.
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adequate
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of
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view
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. The top-notch reason is with the development of technology in
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years,
people
around the world tend to use their
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day by day
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the internet to get
information
that they need or the
news
through social
media
platform
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platforms
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. Take the generation in
this
decade as an example, they tend to get
information
via social
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rather than read a whole article, in light of
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that social
media
can
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the main idea of the
news
and they find it more interesting than
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a newspaper.
In addition
, they can
also
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about the topic or can see what another individual
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about it, and enhance their perspective about the topic.
On the contrary
, I reiterate there are a plethora of strong factors supporting
people
can get
information
through social
media
platform
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. Meanwhile,
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news
from
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cannot be overshadowed either.
Thus
,
people
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public tend to distinguish
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newspaper
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is
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the best way to get
news
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various reasons. To commerce, it is deemed that
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a whole article can help
people
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.
Moreover
, an interesting point that goes with
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is they can improve their social knowledge.
Nonetheless
,
people
in
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think it will waste a lot of time to read a
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one.
To sum up
,
although
both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me
that is
better to get
information
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news consumption
  • editorial standards
  • reliable
  • tactile experience
  • ritualistic
  • in-depth analysis
  • immediate
  • breaking news
  • tailor newsfeeds
  • misinformation
  • fact-checking
  • environmental impact
  • digital carbon footprint
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