You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a

university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide figures about how much proportion of each nutrient is available in
Medium
baked
potato
and Macaroni.
Overall
,
Carbohydrates
constitute the highest nutrient among other
nutrients
in both dishes considered.
To begin
with, in the
medium
baked
potato
, 36% of the total
nutrients
are from
carbohydrates
.The second major nutrient is
protein
which accounts for 25%. Moving
further
, Glucose and other
nutrients
provide an equal amount of nutritional value which is 10% more than the nutritional value provided by
protein
. Other saturated fat provides the lowest value of about 10%. In
Marconi
as well,
Carbohydrates
remain as the major nutrient as in the
potato
dish which is
medium
baked. Macaroni contains 21% of saturated fat , a figure less than twice that of
carbohydrates
.
Protein
and Glucose contribute the same amount
while
other
nutrients
provide 5%, becoming the least nutrient provider in
Marconi
.
To conclude
, Saturated fat is greater in
Marconi
than in
medium
baked
potato
whereas
protein
is greater in
potato
dish than in
Marconi
.
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