The chart below shows the Anthotropology from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthopologysts in work after five years.

The chart below shows the Anthotropology from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthopologysts in work after five years.
The pie chart illustrates the anthropological graduates from one institution did after completing their degree. The table compares anthropologists’ annual
income
after working for five years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the majority of graduates
work
whether full-time or part-time after finishing their degree
while
some continue their postgrad study. In terms of annual
income
anthropologists who
work
with governments make the highest compared to freelancers and private company employers.
According to
the pie chart, there is a total of 67% of graduates who
work
after their studies which accounts for more than 50% working full-time,
while
15% of them choose to
work
part-time. Apart from working, some of them continue studying responsible for 8% full-time and 5% part-time study.
Although
a number of them
work
or study after receiving a degree, some of them are unemployed 12% and 8% are unknown.
On the other hand
, anthologists after 5 years of experience have a wide range of annual
income
. Governments’ employers and freelancers earn the competitive salary with 80% of them receiving more than $75,000
while
20% have less than that, but governments staff make slightly more than freelancers by 10% of the highest
income
group ,
however
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55% of private companies’ employers receive more than $75,000 and the rest 45% receive less.
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