A friend of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it. Write a letter to your friend to ask if he is interested in buying your car. In your letter, • explain why you are selling your car • describe the good points and any bad points about your car • suggest the friend visits you to see and drive your car

Dear Raj, How are you? It's been a long time since we connected. I wanted to let you know that I am travelling to Canada for higher education, so

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I am planning to sell my Fiat

car

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to support my financial expenses. As I am aware that you are interested in

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specific model, so, I was thinking of checking with you before I post any sales advertisements to attract potential buyers. As you know, it is a brand new

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, and I have been using it to drive from home to my office for the past year. As long as the mileage

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, it was driven just for 19000 kilometres. There are no pending services that you have to spend on in the near future or at least for the next 2 years, as it is still under the warranty covered till 2028. I would prefer to change wipers incase if you want to , because winter is coming;

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, it is not required. If you decide to take the

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, please let me know as early as possible.

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, please let me know if you have any time next week to come home and drive the

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to check the conditions. Convey my regards to everyone at home. Take care and see you soon. Best regards, Jeevitha S

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Dec 28, 2025

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organisation

Add clear reasons and keep one idea per paragraph.

content

Tell both good and bad points about the car.

clarity

Suggest a date or time to meet and try the car.

tone

Polite opening and closing.

content

Clear ask to visit and try the car.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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7 paragraphs

221 words

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