Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There are various
forms
of medicine. Obviously
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,Obviously
forms
of drugs
are without side effects
. Some people believe whilst alternative medicines may not be effective, others say they have undesiderable
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undesirable
effects
on human health. I partly agree with this
idea.
To begin
with, I can understand why people do not have confidence in other forms
of medicine. This
is because the products of such
drugs
are from sources with unknown research or experimental background
. It is common knowledge that most of the manufacturers of Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
such
drugs
have little or no scientific knowledge and may have only learnt about how the drug worked on individual
basis for which they wrongly extrapolate to the general population. Based on personal experiences they quote that a single drug can cure several disease conditions. To illustrate Add an article
an individual
this
, my mother purchased a herbal preparation a fortnight ago and was told it could cure headaches, stomach aches, urinary tract infection
and pneumonia. To probe Fix the agreement mistake
infections
further
, she asked for an online source to read more on
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such
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much
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reason, it is logical why people do not have faith in Add a hyphen
above-stated
such
treatments.
Also
, very little information is known about the side effects
of such
drugs
. Practically, these unpleasant effects
are rarely stated on the packaging and individuals are left to the peril of experiencing what is not known as and when they use the product. Several surveys have revealed the shock some herbalists express when informed about an unwanted side effect of their products. This
highlights the very limited knowledge of such
products and the fact that the experimental stage of
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apply
it
is unfortunately being used on real humans.
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To sum up
, I strongly agree that alternative forms
of medicine may generate unpleasant effects
in it's
users and sometimes may not even work.Replace the word
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